talon261 asked:

Hello, I would like to ask you to review Part One of the written storyline for Falling Apart, which will hopefully at some point evolve into a full-fledged webcomic. It is merely in the form of a typed document on Google Docs, as I myself cannot draw very well and need an artist. I hope however, that you may take the time to read it (I posted a link on my blog.). I would like your honest opinion, please.

I went on your blog and clicked it, and it said I need to await permission, so just tell me when I’m good to go and I’ll check it out and get back with you